Well, I saw this and saw it had no reviews, so I figured I'd see for myself and write something more informative for those who come later. So here we go:

The very beginning is neat enough, but that's about all it got going for itself. The villain in the first part is so stupid I'm genuinely wondering how she survived long enough to become older than the age of 5... Many of the situations involving her also makes everyone around them just become straight up blind. That's the only explanation for how little attention these people pay to their surroundings... Later, during the "climax" of the first part, somehow, a proven criminal caught red-handed gets to scream whatever they want at their victim and no one does anything? Why? Not to mention how the MC just takes it for, no reason? Then there's the usual "traumatized lady gets her trauma cured by 2 lines from the ML" and "everyone suddenly unconditinally loves her. It feels like the author just wanted to fast forward through the first part, no matter the cost. Sadly, the cost is believability and character development. Or they just steaight up have no idea how to write something believable. Hell, we even skipped the whole "it's just a contractual marriage" phase, and the traumatized MC is absolutely someone who should mind that, but oh well.

... Last updated on October 2nd, 2023, 8:14pm