I finished this webtoon yesterday.
I wasn’t expecting anything when I picked up this webtoon: the art was good, characters' interactions entertaining and sex scenes hot. But when the plot finally started to deepen and the main conflict was introduced, it quickly became almost unreadable. There are way too many plot holes around major events – for example, simple things like:
One’s contact lenses. It seems that he got them right after he took place of a dead child on a human farm. I wonder how he could afford it. He also works with a person who knows that he took that child’s place, but is not aware of his natural eye colour despite the fact that One has very distinct eye colour.
Or major plot points like:
Humpty Dumpty (or what that crazy albino art’s name was?) being able to stay away from his possessive master for a couple of days in the forest without the latter asking any questions about where his treasured possession/sex toy was.
Maybe it is just me and there were explanations to these points and other plot hiccups; if so, they just weren’t fleshed out well, because there were many moments when I felt so baffled by the plot that I couldn’t mindlessly enjoy sex scenes anymore. This brings me to the ending and how rushed it was. Seriously, despite having some great action moments, it was as stale and anticlimactic as they come.
It feels strange to say that but I really wish that the author cut down the sex scenes to develop the plot more. Or maybe chose a less complicated plot, because the story would have been more enjoyable as PWP than what it is right now.