The storyline's sounds a bit familiar. Just a tad.
It's like Beauty Pop, except Kiri's weaker, klutzy, and less skillful. Oh, and the main guy is not as well developed, more stylish, and unexplainably falls in love suddenly.
I'm used to long-running shoujos, like KareKano or Fruits Basket. But this one pretty much wrapped up the story in one go. It's a sort of win-lose situation.
On one side, there's not a lot of room for character development. I didn't feel that I really got to see what Raito was really thinking. It was all just from Asami's side. That's a set-back for the story going so fast.
But on the other hand, I have to admit, it's a relief to see things end so quickly. Most shoujos(and some shounen) draw much longer stories, making them go on and on when they should be done volumes ago. And this story really shouldn't have to go on for volumes.
So I like that this is short. I just wish that the characters could have been more in depth and I wouldn't have minded if the story had gone on a bit.
All in all, very cute and a fun fast read.