90 Chapters + Prologue (Complete)





Overall
Recommendation: worth reading if you're tired of foolish revenge plots or OP MC's who don't really do anything reasonable, but still end up winning. The story can be a little disappointing in some places, but overall it's a nice ride.
The MC is refreshingly bold, mature, and playful. It's really wonderful to get a female MC that breaks stereotypes of being shy, bashful, and reserved or cruel and calculating. This MC is a bit clever and does use some tricks, but demonstrates kindness and restraint.
The art is very good. Maybe I'm too spoiled because I don't even bother with stories that don't have art this good, but definitely beautiful. There were plenty of opening scenes where my phone or browser was stuck loading for a moment & I just enjoyed looking at a first panel that was beautifully drawn to set the tone of the scene.
The story can be fairly predictable and the big plot reveals are honestly a bit too obvious at times. This felt especially true in the final arc.
Pacing is mostly ok, sometimes poor. The ending feels very rushed. And the story fails to capitalize on the good vibes as it wraps up. I imagine they got shut down or something...
Side characters/assemble characters depth is very poor. As the MC points out, everyone in the story basically seems like an NPC. Ironically, even the people in the main world. Personalities are fairly inconsistent and don't make much sense. Including the MC's main supporter, throughout the story.
We're never given much clarity on why Bai is so rude during MC's reincarnation movements in "heaven" but then especially supportive when MC is actually in the world. There's no clear incentive built for why he cares at all. They don't seem to have a strong relationship he goes from being completely uncaring to entirely petrified for her success and back again throughout the story without good reason. Similarly, the MC's main love interest has so many different personalities and the big reveal in the end doesn't make sense for how they behaved throughout the different scripts.
Many issues, but I do think it was worth the read. Enjoy!