Comment and Critic me art please?

17 years ago
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I've been a proud member of deviant art for a while and I feel that my art isn't really getting out there 🙁
So I'd really appreciate it if I can receive some comments and critics to improve my art.
Thanks in advance for taking your time to look through my art!!
<3
These are a few works I'm proud of:
Vector:
**CG: **
The Colours of Happiness
Elusive
Breezy
Tarnished Palette
Realistic Portraits:
Gaspard Ulliel
Emily Browning
Johnny Depp
Tom Welling
Jay Chou
Rainie Yang

17 years ago
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Why not just post this in the art dump?
this thread is bound to get locked.

17 years ago
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Warn: Banned
you got talent in cartoon drawings. That is the first part.
As for real life people......need more practice.
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17 years ago
Posts: 135
Quote from fallofkakashi
Why not just post this in the art dump?
this thread is bound to get locked.
Where exactly is the art dump? I couldn't find that subforum
and ares6, thanks for commenting ^_^ I'm definitely going to do more practice

17 years ago
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17 years ago
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Dude, youre great!!
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17 years ago
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wow O_O these r really good. i havent seen pics that good in a while. i draw 2 but id have 2 say ur pics turn out better. im not good with the realistic but urs look ak. maybe a little bit more practice and people will think u took their pic or something. as 4 the others.....im jealous of how well u draw ur hands T_T im still working on drawing hands....improving but not as good as urs. ill be able 2 post some of mine soon if ull comment and tell me what i can do better.
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17 years ago
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aww.. you're really buena at drawing 🙂 mi favorite ones are Aesthetic y Gaspard Ulliel, pero all of them are really nice 🙂 ...
aunque... Rainie Yang's hand seem a bit small.....or maybe it's just me.
but i really like all of them 🙂

17 years ago
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Quote from momo10
wow O_O these r really good. i havent seen pics that good in a while. i draw 2 but id have 2 say ur pics turn out better. im not good with the realistic but urs look ak. maybe a little bit more practice and people will think u took their pic or something. as 4 the others.....im jealous of how well u draw ur hands T_T im still working on drawing hands....improving but not as good as urs. ill be able 2 post some of mine soon if ull comment and tell me what i can do better.
Yea, the hands are a real problem for me too, Its really hard to draw all the fingers in a specific pose while watching their lenght
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17 years ago
Posts: 135
Thanks for the comments everyone, and yes, hands are one of the hardest things I've had to draw >3< that is definitely something I need to work on. And proportions too, I haven't exactly come close to nailing that either....
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there.
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good art tho..much better than mine.
and oh, the Art Dump is a thread.... ^_^" I'm new around here and I'm not so familiar with all the threads and stuff, so I apologize for my naiveté. So is it best to just leave this thread and make a post at the Art Dump?

17 years ago
Posts: 562
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Quote from momo10
wow O_O these r really good. i havent seen pics that good in a while. i draw 2 but id have 2 say ur pics turn out better. im not good with the realistic but urs look ak. maybe a little bit more practice and people will think u took their pic or something. as 4 the others.....im jealous of how well u draw ur hands T_T im still working on drawing hands....improving but not as good as urs. ill be able 2 post some of mine soon if ull comment and tell me what i can do better.
Yea, the hands are a real problem for me too, Its really hard to draw all the fingers in a specific pose while watching their lenght
i kno what u mean.....that was my problem today so i said screw it ill make em chibis that way they dont need fingers. ^_^ didnt feel like dealing with it at school. i practice hands at home
SWEET DESPAIR'S LUVER ^^
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I love Alex ^^ The Rev.R.I.P.
I really like your work. :3
But... in the realism... the noses! __ If there's one area I'm extremely picky about when talking realism, it's the noses.

17 years ago
Posts: 135
Quote from momo10
wow O_O these r really good. i havent seen pics that good in a while. i draw 2 but id have 2 say ur pics turn out better. im not good with the realistic but urs look ak. maybe a little bit more practice and people will think u took their pic or something. as 4 the others.....im jealous of how well u draw ur hands T_T im still working on drawing hands....improving but not as good as urs. ill be able 2 post some of mine soon if ull comment and tell me what i can do better.
Thank you so much ^^ and of course I'd look over your art, I'm sure they're fantastic =D I love taking a glance at other people's art, it inspires me greatly and pushes me to improve.
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Quote from momo10
wow O_O these r really good. i havent seen pics that good in a while. i draw 2 but id have 2 say ur pics turn out better. im not good with the realistic but urs look ak. maybe a little bit more practice and people will think u took their pic or something. as 4 the others.....im jealous of how well u draw ur hands T_T im still working on drawing hands....improving but not as good as urs. ill be able 2 post some of mine soon if ull comment and tell me what i can do better.
Yea, the hands are a real problem for me too, Its really hard to draw all the fingers in a specific pose while watching their lenght
i kno what u mean.....that was my problem today so i said screw it ill make em chibis that way they dont need fingers. ^_^ didnt feel like dealing with it at school. i practice hands at home
lol!! Hooray for chibis!! I love chibis too, you can discard fingers necks and whatever, as long as they're cute :3
**@Dubby: **How should I improve my noses. It's harder for the artist to find her own flaws, that's what I think. Something very obvious to the audience could take me forever to notice ^^"

17 years ago
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[quote=momo10]wow O_O these r really good. i havent seen pics that good in a while. i draw 2 but id have 2 say ur pics turn out better. im not good with the realistic but urs look ak. maybe a little bit more practice and people will think u took their pic or something. as 4 the others.....im jealous of how well u draw ur hands T_T im still working on drawing hands....improving but not as good as urs. ill be able 2 post some of mine soon if ull comment and tell me what i can do better.
Yea, the hands are a real problem for me too, Its really hard to draw all the fingers in a specific pose while watching their lenght
i kno what u mean.....that was my problem today so i said screw it ill make em chibis that way they dont need fingers. ^_^ didnt feel like dealing with it at school. i practice hands at home
lol!! Hooray for chibis!! I love chibis too, you can discard fingers necks and whatever, as long as they're cute :3
**@Dubby: **How should I improve my noses. It's harder for the artist to find her own flaws, that's what I think. Something very obvious to the audience could take me forever to notice ^^"[/quote]
thats how i am with faces. my friends will notice if their a little off but i wouldnt till a few min. later. now im 2 a point where m constantly changing something untill my friends finally tell me 2 leave it alone and how much they luv it.......i try not 2 touch em after that but its so hard T_T ^_^ lol
SWEET DESPAIR'S LUVER ^^
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I love Alex ^^ The Rev.R.I.P.

17 years ago
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i kno what u mean.....that was my problem today so i said screw it ill make em chibis that way they dont need fingers. ^_^ didnt feel like dealing with it at school. i practice hands at home
lol!! Hooray for chibis!! I love chibis too, you can discard fingers necks and whatever, as long as they're cute :3
Hey, chibis are my favorite drawing pastime, they are small, cute and easy to draw, I think every artist should start from that, chibis
thats how i am with faces. my friends will notice if their a little off but i wouldnt till a few min. later. now im 2 a point where m constantly changing something untill my friends finally tell me 2 leave it alone and how much they luv it.......i try not 2 touch em after that but its so hard T_T ^_^ lol
My problem on the face are the eyes, if both eyes are not properly lined and look at the same spot it bugs me so much erase it and redraw till I get it right
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