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Ooh... really? I shall go check it out 😀

the movie is exactly what ur talking about, its about 2 and a half hours long, but the story itself is only about half an hour in real time, they just switch scenarios alot.

"Hip-hop was set out in the dark. They used to do it out in the park"

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A girl named Ashiya Mizuki and a boy named Izumi sano would travel to the ends of the world looking for their story to continue....

Oh wait. >_>

Ahahaha... good one...

Mine would be a short scenario, like a shooting or something, but told again and again through the eyes of all the diff ppl that witnessed it. I think that's cool. 🙂

they made a movie of it, its called Vantage Point.

Isn't it the plot of a book written by Gabriel García Márquez called Crónica de una muerte anunciada, i don't remember though the name of the book in english

A wordless comic, called Cuckoo.

Each section of panels corresponds to a cuckoo clock view point based on time and amount of times coming out of the clock ie, the first hour is one panel. The second hour is two panels but an hour after the first. Third is 3 panels, another hour later. You get the idea.

It begins with an empty apartment at 1' o clock in the morning.

Hour two: a man and a woman burst through the door. Making out, they head to the bedroom.

Hour three: They are yelling at each other. The woman is crying. She heads to the bedroom, alone. Ends with man on couch.

Hour four: The man is still on the couch. He is looking through his wallet. He makes a call, all while look apprehensively at the lack of money in his wallet.

Hour five: Some suspicious looking men in black coats appear walking by the window. The man runs and gets a gun from his bedroom. The woman wakes and steps out of the room. The men enter. The man fires a shot at the men. The men fire back and hit the woman.

Hour six: The man is grieving over the body of the woman. He has done his best to save her, but it is apparent that she is dead. A nervous neighbor rings at the door. He looks to be asking some questions but the man shuts the door in his face.

Hour seven: Police arrive. They ring. Man does not go to door. He is shivering in the corner. Police leave.

Hour eight: Police return. They bust down the door with a warrant in hand. They see the man. They look at the gun. They look at the woman. They cuff the man. He is dragged out screaming.

Hour nine: Detectives are inside. Murder scene is being examined. Body is gone except for a chalk outline and a bloodstain.

Hour ten: DEA agents are examing bags with what appears to be cocaine inside. The drawers are open with evidence if a search having taken place. Then one of the agents points at the bag, a picture of the man, then the bloodstain. The other agent shakes his head sadly.

Hour eleven: A police officer is outside guarding the empty apartment. Police tape is on the door. The neighbor comes by. After talking to policeman, he appears to become nauseous and exits. One of the suspicious men comes by and appears to get angry with the policeman. The man leaves angrily.

Hour twelve: The guard policemen turns toward the apartment. He looks angry and stressed. He looks left and right and goes inside. He walks closer and closer towards the "camera's" viewpoint he reaches up and takes the clock off the wall throwing it on the ground. The last shot is of a mirror reflection of the room but at an odd and distorted angle different from the set viewpoint of the rest of the comic. The blood stain looks like a laughing face on the chalk outline body. Money covers the ground around the clock revealed to have been hidden in the clock and exposed when it fell. The bird in the cuckoo clock in also revealed in the mirror to be incredibly twisted looking, with a cracked beak that looks like a demented scream and the rest of the birds face is that of a crying man, cracks coming from his eyes to look like tears or blood.

Thats the end.
A lot more than complex than most peoples but this is a story I wanted to write for a while but can't because i dont think my art skills are yet up to the task of showing exactly what I envision for some of these scenes.

Hope you liked it! Please dont steal! 😀

a man messing around in his lab invents a weapon more powerful and feasible to build than the hydrogen bomb. due to circumstances, intelligence agency in the world finds out. It'd be something along the lines of Monster if u no what i mean.

"Hip-hop was set out in the dark. They used to do it out in the park"

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a man messing around in his lab invents a weapon more powerful and feasible to build than the hydrogen bomb. due to circumstances, intelligence agency in the world finds out. It'd be something along the lines of Monster if u no what i mean.

is it man 😛