As of the second chapter, this is one of the worst stories I've ever read. Cliché plot devices and scenarios abound. And the execution isn't so great, either - a better author could have made the rather generic events a bit more dramatic.
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Pacing is quick though; they're already kissing by chapter two...
Edit: Just read chapter 3. Suddenly HNNNNNNGHH cute, plus "holy crap I wasn't expecting that" scene. Can't wait for chapter 4!