The story is only about Alejandro and how pitiful he is. When he is in the scene, obviously you have to look at him. But even when he is not, he is all everyone talks about. Side characters only appear to make Alejandro jealous, and most of them then disappear altogether into oblivion, never to be heard of again. FL has no interest other than Alejandro. (Seriously girl, get yourself a hobby). And there is no world-building whatsoever.

... Last updated on August 12th, 2020, 4:19am

As I wont continue reading this after the resignation chapter. I cannot stand the white lotus MC that try to be so self sacrificing but ultimately just hurt people that need her the most. She forgot her reason that she exist in the novel world and decide to care about unimportant characters thoughts and rumours - who are they and why should she care?

Anyway the pacing is also not the best and I prefer shota and when he grow its just meh.

I like it at first. Then it became repetitive. It's still a good read, but, eh, it falls flat as long as it progresses.
The ML is cute as a child but when he grows up, he's still childish and seems like never learns. I lost interest after a while.

The art is good, tho.

Tbh this one have a interesting premise but the whole how the story progressed is.... Pretty much upsetting me. This is my personal opinion so this is really subjective.

For a story that came up with canon fodder as the heroine... This story is totally merciless to unimportant canon fodder. Canon fodders who have different goals with main charas are highlighted as a very very awful people which i think is totally an ass move from author.
Bland bland bland characters, I'm sorry being rude but none of the characters have great charisma that can affect me while reading it. Really one dimensional that in the end make me annoyed. The author tries to emphasize that this one is such a pitied character, this one is very very evil.... What about the neutral ones who don't have anything to do for batter with main charas? They're awful because they're all silent from the whole drama.

Should i start with the male lead? Bratty is understandable, but he's using "i have pitiful life" cards to be bratty and selfish. Thanks to him being so selfish (that ironically very mimicking his selfish, self centered parents),
Funnily that author tried to emphasize that oooh he's so sensible and sensitive how he didn't want people to get hurt because of him but it's only in one scene he acted like that from countless scenes

I won't spend bad reviewing to another characters because i think my points for male leads can give hints to how another characters depicted in this story.

I forgot to add another problem in this story: grooming. Change fl age into an old maid and let's see if ml could fall in love with her.

... Last updated on November 26th, 2020, 9:51am

I don't necessarily agree completely, but MondSemmel's review really hits the nail on the head. This is a Manhwa romance and it thoroughly reads like one, with the writing style and tropes that you'd expect to see in that sort of work. That said, the art and the storytelling are very proficient, I've had a good time reading it, and I think that all counts for something at the end of the day.

Is it ground-breaking? No, but it doesn't have to be. This is not great, but it is clearly above average, and I recommend giving it a chance if you like Manhwas and romances.

... Last updated on January 9th, 2020, 3:47pm

Shota 🤮 also dumb fl, pretty boring storyline

This is a thoroughly adequate manhwa. While it is neat to see a protagonist in a supporting role rather than as the lead, the manhwa otherwise covers all the typical tropes without any interesting deviations.

As for the art, the backgrounds are fine, but the faces are disappointingly bland. There's a severe lack of interesting facial expressions; characters do express sadness, say, but not contempt, or amusement, or any similarly subtle emotions.

And the storytelling is pretty repetitive. Most chapters follow the formula of


And some story threads end in a rather anticlimactic fashion, e.g.

It has a unique storyline with numerous exciting scenes