There was wasted potential here. I didn't have any expectations when I started reading this; at every page, every chapter, I wanted to really like this manga. Where Enjin-sensei succeeds is her beautiful artwork and a very interesting, if not ambitious premise. It’s not often you come across a sci-fi themed romance in manga, and even more so in yaoi. Yet, the story becomes a muddled mess partway through. It could have been saved if there had been some scorching smut to balance things out, but the tacked on obligatory not-very explicit sex scene at the end did very little if anything to redeem a pretty lackluster romance.
My chief complaint with this manga was the underwhelming development of the romance. Watase's presence in the latter chapters isn't very strong and I didn't get a good feel for his character at all. Moriya realizes his feelings early on and the build-up of his unrequited feelings was well-done. With the direction the story was taking, there was a sense that things were leading up to a dramatic climax. Alas, it was not meant to be, and once you’ve read it, you’ll understand why. The inevitable confession and Watase’s realization of his own feelings was both anti-climactic and devoid of any tangible passion. All of a sudden, he’s like, I was doing this because I wanted to be like you and I guess I love you? What, how romantic is that?
There was a strong sense of a story unfulfilled or maybe unfinished. Of the number of themes she attempts to cram into the story, why didn’t she make better use of the themes of destiny and fate? When she first introduced the characters as “partners,” I thought that perhaps that both would come to realize that they perhaps they were destined soul mates and that fate had taken a hand to give them a second chance to be with one another. The whole red string theory and so on. It’s not original, but it would have been a lot more interesting than what we got.
Some of the paneling was confusing too and to what purpose was there for making Moriya a werewolf and having him collect semen? I can understand a vampire collecting blood, but why semen for a werewolf? It was a bit fanservish and usually I’m willing to overlook things like that if I enjoyed the material overall, but seeing as a I didn’t, I guess I’ll be nitpicky.
There was an attempt to create something original here, and for that I didn’t rate this as low as others. The pieces were there, but the execution was extremely lacking. Although my review is pretty critical, I still think it was worth reading and good for anyone that’s looking to pass some time. For the art alone, it’s worth trying.