(Up to chapter 21) So I’m enjoying this for the small bits of genius but overall a disappointing story as a whole.

The deaths revival is a genius idea - there’s no going back in time just instant revival. But the penalty is what makes it useless. The skill that allows him to exploit that is inverse which makes the death penalty almost a god send. The action scenes are top tier and and pacing is acceptable. The art isn’t anything amazing but does the job, although it very characteristic of basic manga.

1st qualm this dichotomy between the two skills makes it a match made in heaven but the MC does not exploit this enough.

2nd qualm - no real back story no explaining how skills work - the world building is almost inexistant and nothing is explained.

3rd qualm - only see pros of the skill not enough mention of the bad points - so almost seems broken.

4th qualm - the story is clumsily told, tries hard to insert manga tropes and reactions which a lot of the time don’t make sense -

5th qualm no character building - even his reaction to certain deaths which is like “there is not enough character building for him to react this way” is annoying.

Anyway give it a go - it’s interesting. I would’ve loved for a better story teller to remake this as it has really good potential.

5th