I liked the story's presentation at times from Fumi's younger brother's perspective. His quirky, down-to-earth and accepting nature was very likeable. It was unsual and creatively interesting to see the story narrated at times from this in-the-middle man, who ends up acting as a somewhat love-helper for Takeo.
Like everyone in the story, including a potentially awesome blunt and hard-hitting female character, Takeo and Fumi were both lacking in character development. They weren't overly likeable in their folibies nor human emotions of tenderness, desire, angst, anger..they were just sort of flat. There were a few scenes that had a little butterfly flutter about in my stomach, but it never fluttered furiously or even for very long. Same goes for the humour: I'd just start chuckling a tiny bit (always in scenes with the brother and Takeo) and blam! it's over.
Just when I thought 'oh my! it's starting to get good - it was over! The acceptance of the relationship from Fumi's personality was totally unrealistic and anti-climatic. The ending for the brother was horribly rushed.
The art was clean, clear and emotionally captured correctly, but nothing really outstanding. The story certainly made the art less shiny that it had true potential for. The angles and panels were never really highlighting the drama as well as they could, either.
I gave it a 7 because it kept me reading right to the end in one sitting, and many mangas I simply abandoned. But it isn't one that I'd recommend with the plethora of manga that do sparkle with story and art bouncing beautifully off one another...