It's pretty but the story is a bit lacking. The characters lack depth too.

What about the smut art? I see Hayoon crying, drooling and drooling all over it, even though someone is just sucking on his nipples... dear artist, that's a bit too much. As if all gays just drool around. And why does he constantly stick his tongue out (it's always a pointed tongue) during sex? Is he a dog and wants to pant? And I have to honestly say the smut scenes are definitely not hot, to be honest, it really disgusts me.
You also get the feeling that the couples never look at each other, the eyes are so lifeless, this is apparently because they are drawn on one side and copied on the other side. It would have been better if the pupils had been fuzzy afterwards, or if a little lively wrinkles had been added. It's not just the eyes that were copied on one side, but also the faces, hands and the whole half of the body, if you really pay attention to it, it's very noticeable. For me they are rigid and lifeless drawings. Like porcelain dolls. This creates no emotion and you don't feel connected to the characters. That's how it is in my case at least. The story itself was good, but too soft for me. I think that in the end the author tried to pack too much into the story that we already know from other stories.
I think it was the first work by author and artist Lee Yuz and maybe the art (of the characters) will be better in the next work.

... Last updated on October 8th, 2023, 4:30pm

They are adorable, a totally green flag couple❤️, but...
<spoiler>I'll never understand why authors forcefully add noncon with third parties to each series, disgusting...and tiring...</spoiler>

... Last updated on December 1st, 2022, 2:11pm