I don't know what it is about that saying, but the way it was used in this oneshot was awesome. Sure the female protagonist was puny and frail in personality, but I still think she was a good person. She wanted to talk it over with her ex, she tried to change herself for the better. She thought about herself critically and was also able to still cuss someone out. I think she was an admirable heroine. I'd say the male protagonist was the one that was more ehh. XP I think this was a good story, and I look forward to reading any of this author's other works.

I found this by pure coincidence, and I really liked it. The art was good, there was plenty of passion and steamy romance. My only complaint is some corny words during the graphic scenes. I liked the overall story, but I wish there was more. The second story to me however was a huge let down from the first, and didn't belong in the same book as the first story.

Well since I am endlessly searching for mature romance mixed with smut, I can tell you that there are not many mangas out there in this catagory. So I was very glad to read this. The smut was sexy at a couple of points, so that was done very well.
What I didnt see was the development of romance, because it was very short. There wasn't enough time to make a dramatic plot or to allow for the characters to grow/develop. But then again you cant expect that from a one-shot which is why I feel good romantic stories cant be expressed in one-shots.

The art was quite good and the bishies were sexy enough for me to indulge in it. I think the mangaka has good ideas and I hope she writes a longer manga soon. I'd recommend this to all those who want josei and smut under the umbrella of romance.

it was a good story. :] the one shot was very very cute~! they both had their own unique elements, and the smut was good. haha. i liked the developement of the characters a lot.

i was a little confused about whether the first guy was bi-sexual. XD when she said, i hate you and him! he was like.. don't insult my boyfriend. that was kinda weird. but oh well.

over all, a decent read, good art.

I wouldn't say annoying heroine, because she's right in telling them off after hearing what they are about. I actually kind of like her, except the fact that she's falling for those jerks far too easily... The guy is a pushy playboy alright and there's also a lot of melodrama, but their affair actually is supenseful in some way.

7/10 for art and because it by far isn't the worst 1 volume smut I ever read.

... Last updated on June 18th, 2009, 2:25pm

There was no "suspenseful and dangerous love affair". That part was more of an afterthought and was over before it began. Plain silly.

But it's your typical smut story: Annoying heroine, pushy guy, melodrama, and sex. Everything underdeveloped. Art was the only thing good, and even then it wasn't that great.