The translation wasn't bad, but it could have been better both in its appearance (typeface, etc.) and in sentence structure and meaning (it got a little hard to understand and wasn't as good of a translation as it could have been). The scans weren't great either, but they were legible. But I AM glad I got to read it!
It was cute! I'd have like a little more development, but it's short, so that makes it difficult.