This has been on my list for quite a while now, and I finally decided to read it today. Why the hell did I put it off for so long? is what I had thought when I finished reading. Personally, I like the art and I think the way it looks a bit sketchy fits perfectly with the story. Though there were some angles in which I thought the face was completely off, there were also some panels in which I thought the art was absolutely sexy. So all in all, the art is either hit or miss, love it or hate it. 9.5/10
Plot wise, there's nothing I could really pick on other than the fact that I wish it was a bit longer. I do agree with gloomy gloo that Akira's feelings were developed a bit too fast, but I also want to add that I also find Torihara's feelings to be developed pretty quickly. Hell, they didn't explain very much on how it developed other than he just couldn't help himself. I also found myself thinking a bit like Torihara in the last chapter while reading this story, cos' somehow, Akira's feelings seem somewhat "suspicious" or not fully-developed, so that was a bit of a step-back for me...but then again, the somehow not-so-genuine feelings gave me the realistic feel. Lastly, I just wanted to add that the fact that both characters tend to overthink about everything was kinda cute, and it gave me the warm-fuzzy feelings, haha. 8.8/10
Now for the one-shots. The first oneshot was great, that's all. It has so much potential and it could be longer if Yamashita Tomoko wanted to, but I think her decision to end it like that was just perfect. It had a lot of angst and I like the whole connection with his contacts, it for sure didn't fall short as a one-shot. 9/10
The second one-shot, ahhh. This one was kind of disappointing, I honestly don't remember what happened right after I read it, so I had to read it again...it was fairly cute, though. I like Kawabe's "You want me to freakin' murder you?" 7.7/10
All in all, Dining Bar Akira left me satisfied after I read it. I didn't really expect much since it was only one volume, but damn, this alone is better than many other yaois I read that span 5-6 volumes.
The average I got for this manga was 8.75, but I think I'll go for a 9.