Storytelling, dialogue and action flows naturaly it's pretty enjoyable trip when you read it compare to another isekai manhwa it's easily 9.5/10 althought there's a minor flaws but it still entertaining. I read it on kakao and already spent lots of coins to support the artist

... Last updated on August 24th, 2023, 3:25am

My only complaint is that the shadow world arcs were boring, so I skipped all those.

Nothing written is particularly unique and you can easily guess whats going to happen next and even what people are going to say most of the time.
Packed full of shallow flat characters devoid of any personality outside of how they feel towards the protag&friends. This was supposed to be about magic but instead its barely just the generic "Grr im a noble, I hate commoners!" drivel.
It's like somebody perfectly gathered ideas that have already been done before except they changed absolutely nothing about it.

... Last updated on May 17th, 2023, 10:39pm

And every female character seems to have caterpillars for their eyelashes. Unappealing, and even annoying, character designs. Slow, slow, SLOW plot.

Even during the supposedly emotional scenes like where Pram is all grateful for getting his rapier back feels so out of left field. It's so exaggerated...and I usually freaking love over the top anything...but this honestly feels like it was ripped out of the Murim genre. Usually, in hybrid Murim/Chinese Wuxia/Xianxia X Western style fantasy there's something that'll tie them together but here it's just so haphazardly done. Just really unfulfilling. There's zero payoff when the main dude supposedly does something "clever". I left feeling like...wait, that's it? That's ALL?!

I feel like I've been cheated of a good story the longer I read this. Ugh. Dropped at Ch.24.

The pacing is a little bit slow, the chapter is short, the drawing is ok, and it's not that bad. It's the noble vs commoner things, where all the nobles is a simpletons who hate commoners for no reason. There are plot holes here and there, but it still acceptable. I think the author really likes putting too much dialogue at the end of every battle, giving enough time for the villain to escape.

... Last updated on September 21st, 2022, 8:25am

Theme of the story great, shadow worlds bears the past events. Huge potential, poor execution.

Idk why, but i really hate Pram with all my heart. PS why must he be a midget...

This is definitely one of the best manhwas in my opinion and as far as for it to be a type of reincarnation manhwa this one is definitely a little different the MC doesn't ride on this journey alone I like how he cares about his companions and how he uses his past knowledge to factor out the good and the bad about himself and his companions to make this even stronger than their past lives the mc is very thoughtful and smart, This one manhwa is really a satisfying read.

I'm a bit torn on this one. I agree with many of the issues others raised. Characters are somewhat 1-dimensional, and the story gets draggy at times. But the main idea is fun, drawing is great, and when the story speeds up it can get really fun and exciting.

This manhwa has some of the worst characterization I've ever seen. Azest (or Adjest or whatever her name is) is a plank of wood. She has literally ZERO personality.

Romantica is an annoying tsundere and somehow stupid despite supposedly being one of the best magicians. The MC also constantly lies to her for no reason. Why she continues to follow the MC despite him lying to her I cannot understand.

Pram is not a real character, he's basically just there for comic relief. His entire character can be summarized by the word "sidekick".

The villains are equally poorly written. Basically one-dimensional characters with very simple motivations (revenge, prejudice, etc) and quite predictable.

I really wanted this series to be good. I really really liked Azest's character design. She's one of the prettiest characters I've seen in a webtoon and I really wanted her to have a proper, fleshed out personality to match the art. Unfortunately after reading 120 chapters I could not detect even a hint of personality behind Azest's pretty exterior. That was the biggest disappointment for me and it's why I dropped this series.