Ootemachi Tokio is an elite businessman. When a bizarre dream forces him to pay attention to temp worker Takebashi, are Ootemachi's days of being self absorbed over?
Oneshot (Complete)






Actually i didn't like the story that much... until it ended. Of course it's not your stereotypical happy ever after ending, but that made it nice. Of course I also hoped for them to get together, but... He did not die, nor did he survive. Everything's up to the readers mind. I like that... It leaves that feeling of hope in you...
the ending was very poetic and yet bittersweet. although I don't like the art that much and it was looking kind of clumsy but still the story was beautiful. I don't see why people are making a fuss over the ending. it was clear what happened and how it finished. of course it is not your usual happy, straightforward ending when couples kiss and make up, it was more artistic than that and I really liked it. ^__^
O.k., some people like cliffhangers, but this is getting a TBC at the most crucial moment and knowing there was never another episode.
The art is crap, but the basic story was generic but interestingly done, unfortunately the unresolved ending ruined it.
this was good for a oneshot but the ending seemed kind of tragic, as it didnt elaborate any further I would assume it ended in a tragedy?. But overall a good read.