The story was really good. It wasn't original, but how the story was told made it flow well. Nothing moved too fast, and while there were a lot of cliches, they were done well. I liked that the uke wasn't a typical uke crying "'no, no!'," nor was the seme "I'm doing you even though you're saying no but what we're doing's not rape because I like you." Basically, I like that it's mutual consent between the two, and that their relationship isn't dominated by either character.
Now, the art. I liked it. I really did; however, at times the characters felt a bit stiff, mainly because she was inconsistent with the jaw length and because she never left a space in the line where the jaw met the neck. I also wasn't thrilled with the way she drew the characters eyes; more than half the time I thought they looked blind, yet when she took the care to distinguish the pupils, they were nice. I also wish she had drawn more backgounds; there was too much empty space. An empty backgrounds good if you're using it too emphasize the character's expressions, but otherwise, you start wondering where they are.
But, aside from the fact that her artwork is a bit stiff, I really liked the character designs. The men looked like men, not flat-chested girls. I'm sure if you read yaoi, you've come across this.
Overall, if you're looking for something to fill a couple hours and you're tired of reading one-shots (most BL that I've found to be any good is no longer than a volume), this is it.