The story revolves around relationship interest between Natsumi Okajima (female) and Shoutarou Ninomiya (male), who are currently living in the same house due to fraud. Natsumi has two daughters and Shoutarou has two sons and oddly enough it seems that their children are of similar age.
The behaviour of these "adults" is childish to say the least. I expect this kinda of bad writing for younger couples, but this is for grown adults with kids. The conduct of these adults, including the ones that fawn over them is pathetic. The only two people that seem to get all the (unwanted) attraction are Natsumi and Shoutarou. And the people that go after them, go to absurd levels without shame. It seems they are all idiots and just want drama. Not realistic at all.
The same stupid adolescent cliches occur in this manga but its more absurd it occurs too often and they are adults. Like the idiot female lead: I will just go and have a drink with the man that loves me but I really want nothing to do with him. I will go and have dinner with him. I will go and work for him, but no touching. I will go and see him in the middle of the night because his chest hurts and he said please, but nothing will happen, trust me.
She has the audacity to say she won't betray Shoutarou, after doing all that. The woman needs a damn lobotomy. The man is also a total idiot. If they are lucky they can get two for one deal and both get lobotomised. It seems the Shoutarou is an idiot magnet, but it's my conjecture.
After the first Jezebel disappears, the story just gets worse. Natsumi really is an idiot of epic proportion (chapter 51, 53) but lucky for her, their problems occur in sequence and in my view out of order. I cannot say much without tons of spoilers.
The four evil in-laws, the Jezebels and the President mother, just does not cut it for me. It lacks the seven dwarfs and an evil step mother. Without them, it seems incomplete.
Chapters 51, 53 and 56 cemented my views on the couple. It's hard to forgive the idiocy of these two. Going back to the seven dwarfs, I am serious it really needs them.
The shallow nonsensical drama is completed with the fact the characters have paper thin personalities. Kids are OK, because they are super cute. Completed it because it's already fully scanned. Giving it a generous 4.