Okay reading the commentary of the author for volume 15, I realised the author made up the character design for the main characters brother, since one of the plot point had mentioned
The two brothers being clones.
Also the series is logic but the final battle is horrible especially how
! how kiyotaka can't kill himself but ayumu potentially can doesn't make sense, they are clones identical same structure same taste etc. so the fact he can't kill himself means ayumu can't kill him, if they want along with this logic, I would have accepted.
. The series is so poorly written in some areas, as some parts are enjoyable admittedly.
I thought the ending was not that good, but could have been a lot worst, they resolved the tough plot points in a very convenient and easy way, the readers would not be impressed as it is difficult to give a satisfying plot points.. I was confused when readers mention romance, as i thought the dynamic between the two has always been the same, showing they don't change and still think each other as friend or a rival feel to it as they show some form of disrepect to each other, but respect at the same time.
My problem was how hiyono is a mary sue, She can collect information so fast, cut herself without writing in pain, motivate the main character very easily, it bothered me how some of the characters haven't been punished been such leniency I mean they
commited a lot of crimes and murder, sure they have excuses, but it still feels insincere for them to give them freedom, as they kill they should pay for the consequence
Maundy thursday had a repentant character but still pay for his crimes. Shonen manga can be well written look at ashita no joe and akumetsu, there is some realism to not. Most series isn't 100% realistic, but at least make it feel beliveable enough for readers to feel immerse and allowing them to suspend their disbelief.
Also the side characters were very neglected, as the author acknowledge this flaw. Now for those that mention pseudoscience they are partly correct. As there is still science fiction that felt scientific, but when they mention the power of fate that is already pseudoscience and not science fiction anymore.
I like the final message sort of in terms of concept, despite fate being absolute in some certain parts you shouldn't give up living, as living life to the fullest rather than accepting destiny is depressing. Better to be happy than be depressed no many what life gives you. Instant bullet conveyed this concept way better.
Still the series contradict itself sometimes, how the main character is always lonely which I disagree, he had friends no matter how many times he says he doesn't as hiyono gives a lot of emotional support others not as much but they still provide support. Overall this series was a mess that the author couldn't keep up with the story anymore and was really struggling with some parts of the story. Also the final battle felt way TOO easy and the concept of
, savers, watchers and hunters were neglected very quickly
Also to repeat, I believe this series had no romance teased or hinted whatsoever and
the plot twist with hiyono was really stupid, no foreshadowing and just made me indifferent as it is not convincing and didn't add much to the story
, plus the female aren't portrayed well as most are temperamental, violent for no good reason , especially ryouko . Overall one of my least favourite series of all times next to zetsuen no tempest.