Shounen Zanzou : Not really as touching or as profound as the comments would have you believe, but original enough to set itself apart from other BL, even so many years after it was written. crazyboutcute complained about how "illogical" the characters are, which is pretty puzzling: as is obvious from their backstories, both Lawrence and Adrian are emotionally unstable and Adrian suffers from a psychological condition while, to Lawrence, abusive relationships are the norm. Not every pairing in this world is sweet, logical, or even morally correct, after all. And I didn't feel that Kaori Yuki was trying to glorify their behaviour, so the twisted love affair became what it was supposed to be: a well-executed plot device and not a failed attempt at some kind of moral lesson or pity-play. 7.0/10
Devil Inside : I glimpsed the ghosts of some interesting ideas here and there in the plot, but the writing, characterisation, and overall execution were simply too awful: artificial emotions, "love conquers all" played to blatant extremes, the characters' utter lack of mental trauma despite the terrible experiences they went through, a deficit of consequences from the villain's actions... 2.5/10
When a Heart Beats : The premise wasn't bad, and I liked how the male MC
planned to save the two women even before he fell for one of them,
but the romance was too contrived and plays right into the "if a guy helps a girl out when she's down she'll automatically fall in love with him" trope. I could have forgiven that if this story were written by a male mangaka or before, say, the '90's, but as neither case applies here and the plot isn't interesting enough to earn many points on its own: 4.5/10