part 1 was really nice that i was hanging and excited to read the next chapter right away. the pacing and building of characters were just right until part 2 ruined it all with rushed conclusion. the art is no doubt hot.

Beautiful Ougi-sensei porny bishounen art sparkles all over once again. Simple, erotic Ougi-sensei story telling in this one though; she never gets very complicated or deeply involved with her characters. Okay for a quickie if you are in need of an Ougi-fix... but below par when compared to her usual, longer works.

... Last updated on December 18th, 2010, 9:52am

Ah. Classic Ougi Yuzuha; awesome guy secretly fell in love with an ordinary (but still awesome!) guy, gets jealous, and then happily ever after (oh, no smuts so far, though) Nothing special, yet it's her M.O, so who am I to judge?

Just.....

now I'm somewhat convinced that she has a penchant to use.....let's say, 'extraordinary' name.

First Star Right, then Saburina? Really? I know it's a portmanteau name of both protagonists, so it's endearing in a pairing-kind-of-name. But Saburina? Sabrina?

Now I can't take it seriously because when I think about this, i think about Sabrina the Teenage Witch, and no offense to the fans of Sabrina the Teenage Witch, it's just....too clashing.