While many of the panels are sparse or do not have background illustrations, the way in which panels have or do not have backgrounds suggests it is a deliberate method to emphasize the characters without distracting from them. Unlike a lot of manga out there, these characters do have some meat on their bones and some slight muscular curves that are attractively placed to suggest lean athletic bodies able to fight the typical RPG monster. It's a welcome change from other mangas with anorexic muscle-less characters able to wear heavy armor and wield heavy weapons. Considering that the manga has only one volume to show off the characterizations, the author provides a good balance between in-game and out-of-game time for the two main characters. In addition, the "what happened to the characters when they grew older" situation was also covered and that was very refreshing. There's been many a time I've wondered what happened to the characters in other mangas, but the author never provided any continuation. The elf girl is well-drawn and is seemingly the lead character when in the game as she is in the foreground most of the time. Outside of the game, the story is told more from the guy's point of view and this adds a nice back and forth perspective change that makes the story feel a bit fresher and not ponderous. With virtual reality like that, students could just stay at home and meet in a virtual school. The advantages include cost savings on building school buildings, utility costs, and maintenance on them due to wear and tear.

Damn... the art work in this thing was really beautiful at times.

I really wish this was more than a one shot hentia. I'd love to keep reading a series with the MMO story and the last chapter's humor.

What surprised me was that this is by the same artist as Dance in the Vampire Bud - made me pretty happy. The anatomy's great, and there's a certain appeal about it being an MMORPG. It's not really deep in any way, but the manga's pretty enjoyable. Or maybe it's because I'm an oddball case...

... Last updated on June 23rd, 2011, 9:48am

I think this is the first hentai I am commenting on. and I read quite a few.

I went into reading this with mixed feelings and anticipations. the cover page is tentacly-like, but the woman is WOWWTFOMG kinda and doesnt seem to mind it one bit. fine. then I started reading it and I was just blown away. the two dimensional story, the fantasy mixing with real life, the humor and the cuteness.. WAAAA. not to mention few slight twists. just enough to hold me still for a moment or two there.

mind me, the story isn't mindblowing. but it fits in here perfectly! also, we have a few time skips. quite big ones at that. I found out I loved them. and there there's another side-story at the end. a nice touch for all us otaku-freaks around.

I completely recommend this. as for the tentacles thingie, there is one scene in there and.. it manages to give off a really kinky feel. nothing like the norm in this area.

this is probably mainly targeted at all us lovely guys out there. but for some reason, I feel that girls might be able to enjoy it too. will test it out with mine as soon as I can..