It's a bit funky that the main character is draw with overt vampire fangs that nobody seems to notice, but the art is otherwise decent. The failing point on this one is the story or more accurately, how it was executed. A bunch of characters are just thrown out all at once with no development and multiple battles occur. Most of the plot development that does occur is rather corny as others have already stated.

If things progressed at a slower rate with more development for the characters, the overall concept was interesting enough that it probably could have been a series.... which is a real shame if you think about it.

It was okay for a Oneshot, quite a good idea but not that well executed. But I don't think it would have worked as a series. The art was reasonable but like NightSwan said it was abit corney

i thought it was good, could have made a good Shounen, i don't think it might get a series cuz this oneshot was out way back in may i think, well i do hope ITOU Shamu works hard to get something released.

I don't read shoujo oneshots that are centered aroud romance.
I also don't read shounen oneshots that center around "special powers/special gifts"
Why?
This is why. I must say that this oneshot was a waste of time.
Cliched to the core.
And
>___>;

Oh and the dialogue.. Shoot me... So CORNY!
All the talks with the girl... And all the Blood talks. Bah...

Why am I giving it a 3?
-The badass bad guy was kinda cute.
-The pooch was cute.
-The art was... Reasonable.

My CORNY plot summary (put in spoilers for those who are not interested):




For shounen lovers only...
It might turn out into an ongoing series.
Probably...
I hope not... >___>;