This one-shot really is something that could make anyone laugh because of how cute and silly it is without being nonsensical. Plot wise the story is pretty normal, but it's how it was portrayed that makes the read quite refreshing (to me at least). I especially love how the mangaka designed the characters and drew them so cute. The chibis are just too adorable for words. Haha I feel like I'm still grinning while typing this.

I reeeally like the art style. It's super cute~
The story's pretty light and fluffy (or should I say sparkly). Since it's a oneshot though it does feel lacking, like it didn't put enough in just the oneshot. Maybe if it was a little bit longer?
Anyways, it seems it is the first non-doujinshi by the mangaka so if this is the first in making her own characters and her own story, I'd say it's a pretty good start o v o I'd love to see more because I find her style just so adorableeee AHH.

It was adorable but too short. Oh, oneshots.

This is so adorable and whacky - ah I want more! Perfect for someone who needs a laugh and needs something short. And it actually works too. Now I need to get another lung, excuse me~

At first I thought it seemed a little bit plain and is if it had been done before. Some authors struggle to keep a story short enough to fit as a oneshot and this is certainly one of those cases. Which makes me upset because I am heads over heels for these characters! I wish I could see more with them. They're adorable!