The pacing feels nice and fine, but obviously in a romance one shot, if the pacing seems realistic and believable, you can imagine there's not much progress or character development. So it's not a neatly wrapped with a bow romance where girl and boy meet, drama and conflict occur and true love blossoms in twenty pages, but it's a sweet start to a possibly unrequited love? I would love it either way!

This is another of those Shoujo oneshots, that come up with a nice atmosphere and cute drawing style. BUT - A predictable and well-known storyline. In conclusion it's a good read for lovers of the genre and "1st love" fans, but if you seek something special, then this might be "average" (yet not bad).