I find the dialogs awkward and the art is not to my liking. For the first thing could be the scanlation at fault, I don't know. But the events switch too sudden into drastic too so maybe the dialogs fit to it. It's still weird and sudden. I was confused a couple of times. The second half of the story was better there.

I like the premise and the conclusion.

The story is so good. And his expression in the last page. Fufuufufuuuuu.
The story wasn't needlessly long. No unnecessary explanations and dialogues. It just ended the right way making you crave for more. Fufufufufufuuuuu.
I give it a 10. A true masterpiece in smut genre.

OMG... Just finished reading it. Its just a few pages but the flow is just so right. And the characters so well built and yet are still so mysterious. I am dying to know more about them. And judging by the previous comments, everyone can seethe potential. I know that sometimes a beautiful story is ruined by the makers wishing to cash in more on its popularity by turning it into a serialization. But trust me, this one wont. This is just the perfect premise for at least a 5 volume manga.

And about the smut -- one of the best i have seen in a while! Undoubtedly. Its beautiful, the art is haunting, and made me go all squirmy in my heart without being too revealing.

The relationship between Chiaki and Miyabi is based on an interesting premise. Two people whose lives changed but still remain to be the puzzle pieces that each other need - how lovely! I wish their romance will be explored further and be made into a serialization. They are both good-looking characters too, which is a bonus!

Well alrighty then. Morie's art as always is beautiful and smooth. The story didn't feel rushed which is a blessing in a oneshot and the main characters were interesting. The sex scene was also done in a 'not too much not too little' sort of way as well, which is something I like. I would of liked to see how the girl went through her 'transformation' though, I wish that had been elaborated upon.

... Last updated on June 14th, 2014, 7:07pm

Morie Satoshi's art as usual stuns and creates a visceral reaction with its haunting beauty. Story is interesting, definitely worthy of serialisation, hasn't been explored enough in a oneshot, a bit too dramatic if you ask me. But pacing is brilliant, characters are intriguing and There Isn't Enough Smut Goddamit! Expressions and actions and art is slick as all hell, but I feel MS sama needs to start teaming up with an author to be able to deliver better stories. Her plots are always very unnerving or iconoclastic, but delivery falls a bit short. Love her work though! Want moar!