Like previous commenters mentioned, this could easily be turned into a full length series - and how I wish it was! The plot is not a terribly original one - there are a multitude of other series with a tough female character who has a "secret" real personality which is discovered by a sadistic male character - but the mangaka has managed to take what's familiar and make it fun. Ayako's real personality is also pretty hilarious and provides much of the humour. As for the art, it is pretty clean and sharp. It's a real shame this story isn't longer.

It seems to me more like a prequel or 1st chapter. I like the art. And the characters are quite interesting. Of course it's not really original, but the author could make something more interesting within this setting, and it could've lasted more than it did.

This oneshot is truely adorable. There is nothing new about it but it is sweet just the same. Ayako really wants to change herself and is trying hard for it. Now she has a friend in Haruka who will help her in the future. It's too bad that this was a oneshot, it would have been nice if it was longer.