Let me clarify first that I love Amagakure Gido-sensei, and I say this after having read her BL, GL and seinen titles. This manga, though, is like an odd exception in her repertoire; it sticks out like a sore thumb in both the art and plot departments. The progression of the story feels very forced and contrived, while the messy panels and transitions did not do anything to help make this a smoother read. The series of events that unfold throughout the manga is just as awkward as the characters' behaviours most of the time. Hopefully this doesn't become a pattern and is only a hiccup in sensei's writing career.

very good, if you craving for something fluff but also angst its here for you..i cry alot when reading this, both couple is loveable, but older brother story is so sadd

all in all, a very sweet plot and relationship between the characters.

it feels very disjointed, though. the perspectives between characters switch without any notice and it's difficult to tell some of the motivations of some characters. the plot flows choppily and suddenly lurches forward without warning. needs more polish in this arena and better planning. sweet nonetheless.