If you've read enough oneshots you'll know after having the summary itself, which I guessed correctly. So the story didn't really hold a lot of water for me. While the hero was cute and a little puppy dog like in his steely determination, she came off far too frigid and unlikeable, regardless of her circumstances. Nothing here, including art, dialogues or the direction of the storytelling, kept me hooked and I've read other oneshots which moved me far more. OK read, nothing memorable.