It has a promising start and I would've loved to see it continued. As a one-shot, it felt "open". I guess it's the open-ended ending.
Still, this story got to me and I adore it.

This oneshot really is amazing, the mangaka managed to create a wonderful story that started and ended so nicely, create wonderful character’s and an amazing plot that really made this oneshot a work of art! Not to mention the female lead was a tough character, with such a strong personality. Wonderful!

9/10- Was great

... Last updated on July 15th, 2011, 8:49am

ok im kind of confused! will not with the story i get all that and yea it seem a bit short and not a great oneshot if i do say then again there have been a few oneshot like these before, but anyway the thing that confused me is the character with long hair is that character a guy/girl? cuz at the end that person is saying that "Who wishes for you to live from the bottom of her Heart"

Huge props to the mangaka for managing to build such a promising plot in the space of one chapter. The characters are interesting and there's already one surprising twist towards the end, plus good artwork for a bonus. There's a kind of sweet, melancholy feeling to the story that fitted well with the background we've been provided with.

It's a shame that it wasn't continued, because it would have made a great series. This would have been great as a first chapter, but as a oneshot, it left me feeling kind of empty. There was a lot of room for continuation, and I would have enjoyed seeing the mysterious "Prince" get fleshed out more. If you don't like open-ended stories, then I'd avoid this one.

When I first read this, I did not realize that it was a oneshot. I thought that for a first chapter the story had a lot of potential. Good artwork, characters starting to develop etc. Then when I realized that this was only a oneshot, I felt disappointed and unsatisfied. It really has the potential to be a good story, but too much is left out for a oneshot in my opinion. It is worth reading since the story premise is good. Too bad it was not a few more chapters longer.

The art is good, and the story is all right. My only real problem is that the plot doesn't really finish. You can only see the story from one perspective for it to work.

art is clean
story is clear
don't expect to feel for the characters since it's only a one-shot
a few action sequences, but not much else