You're right, it is too sparkly and too many blushes and too many inner cheesy lines meh it's too sugary even for me. Oh yeah, and the female lead is stupid. The author tried to pass her as sweet and innocent, but she ended just being dumb. And what's with all these people crying when they're sad, crying when they're happy meh. I wrote this while reading, thank God it was short.
I don't like to write a bad comment, but I simply didn't like this one. But as Rorii said it could be an ok read for other people (much much younger )

i like the female lead, she knows where she stands, with the different status and all, and well i guess she's cool Usually i read Harlequin to just waste my time, but this is kinda interesting, and i wish the story would go on...but then one thing i don like

I've read a lot of these Harlequin stories, and I must say this is one of the weaker ones. The male lead is pretty handsome, but the girl is just another run of the mill ditz. There's not a lot of diversion from the Cinderella archetype- poor girl is maid for rich guy, rich guy takes interest in poor girl, girl not poor at the end.

Save your time and try another of the Cinderella stories- there are plenty of them under this label, and a lot of them add something to the mix.

How is it possible to add so much sparkles in each page ! I know it's cinderella type of story but it's just too much !

But if you're into fairy tales you might like it and, anyway, it's short to read so just try .

... Last updated on May 9th, 2012, 2:48pm

If only I could rate this a zero honestly its just. WHAT the hell am I reading? Too much sparkle, the romance isn't really romance. The conflict isn't really a conflict.... this is just lacking so much! Don't recommended unless your into that sort of thing I guess

... Last updated on May 4th, 2014, 5:39pm