Me and like other agree that he has a good art but in writing plot for a story theres a lot to work on. At first it was interesting but with every new volume you wanted to read less and less...Why? you could ask, well i guess because the of the story witch was getting a bit confusing as more and more question started to pop to my head, then the relationship between two main characters wasnt moving forward at all...sad i like his art. But art isnt only that makes a good manga good.

wow the art is perfect and the story is in the way to perfecttown. i really love this manga. the way that it doesn't make sense sometimes is waaay tooo good. i love it. thanks for your hard work. i recommend you read this but don't give up. where there is smoke.......

If you see an Im Dahl young manhwa/manga, just..don't even read it.
Undoubtedly the worst mangaka I have ever read a series of.

-Why?

- Plot is paper thin and eventually becomes nonexistant.
-Absolutely no character growth for all but 1 or 2 characters.
-Induces rage, -at the mangaka for making this abolute bull I might add.
-Needless arcs and fillers that make no sense.
-Fanservice that make no sense (since it's supposed to be a serious manga/manhwa?)

Sure, read it.
Then avoid all the rest of his works like the pleague.

That's what I did.

Good art, story stopped making sense. Still haven't figured out why pandoras are ripping each others throats out when they should be fighting the enemy. The author could be working on something more worth wile than this like Aflame and Legend of the Maian both of which are better than this manga. I don't get it, so I eventually had to give up on this one.

as alot of ppl are stating... his works...
Hes a wannabe George R.R Martin (Game of thrones)... and a big fuckin failure at it
This is just another one of his series where like Martin he throws tits and ass around and kills off ppl left and right....
but unlike Martin's work the plot is shit..the characters are shit, the development is shit...EVERYTHING is half assed...this guy would have been better off as a hentai artist...with making this story as a hentai long series.... cuz theres nothing decent about it...its extrememly misogynistic to the core..pretty much like his other works.... He started with a good concept and ruined it ... so ya this series would have been better off as an ATTEMPT to give plot to a porn series

This had promise in like the first 30 or 40 chapters, but went into the shitter ever since. Just like a normal Dal-Young work. He starts off decent, but blows his load early on and half-asses to the end into a complete nightmare.

Kazuya should have been given a decent role other than emotional crutch. Seeing how he was spammed at having a special his body and freezing ability, but nothing. Absolutely nothing and he's still a pathetic pile of shit character at current raw 163.

The girls aren't much better and if the world was in danger we'd be screwed. They fight and butcher each other more than anything. Dal-Young thinks if he tosses in some tits and ass scene we'll forgot at how shitty the plot is.

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The beginning isn't too bad, but it becomes increasingly obvious how useless all guys, including the male lead, are. The entire thing is about chicks beating the shit out of other chicks--not that I minded seeing action women, being a woman myself, but it got boring fast. Now, it's gotten to the point wehre I question the existence of a plot. Good art, but I ask myself once more: "Why am I still reading this?"

Most of the comment i read here, seem most people wanted to see ecchi scene only in this manga. LOL. Well for me the plot develop quite good but... so.. this manga suitable for those who looks at the plot and fighting scene. NOT suitable for those who seek to read Ecchi scene to flap.LOL haha

At first I was hoping this would be a fun series with occasional ecchi. I wasn't looking for more from this author. But it started to get annoying. Author keeps adding useless crap, angst and over the top drama. And, although it can be explained, useless male characters remain useless even 20 volumes after. This series will never become more than a reference to pretty art work. It's too bad.

love the artwork, and the female characters,

hate the story, and the male characters...

what i hate about this manga?

1. stupidly weak protagonist. even issei from Highschool DxD is waaaaay better than him.
kazuya is pretty much useless.... all he can do is talk. yes he is a talented limiter, but still...he is a typical bullied kid at school.
not only him, almost all male characters in this manga are a bunch of wimps. like all their balls have been cut off.

2. the incest brother arc was totally unnecessary...and it's ruined the image of the main heroine. also it can be disturbing for some people.
i began losing even more interest since this arc... well, what the hell? is this a NTR hentai or something??